8/20/13

Wing Walker




Wing Walker 

Once
She
loved flash
eye-candy men
lickable lollipops of bronzed muscle
hot piston bodies pumping pleasure through the night
innocence exploring the childhood of her womanhood, sweet couplings that soothed without satisfying.

Until...

He whispered, bodiless voice thrumming "The best sex happens from the neck up."
Commands launched her, walking wings of his desire.
Mind game, word fuck, captured
her, imagination unbound.
Mind candy
savored
eternally.



~Nara Malone

That last line of the first stanza won't fit on one line but it should be one line. Fibonacci and I are are both out of our comfort zones on this one. This is my contribution to dVerse Poets OpenLinkNight. Stop by to see what others wrote or to join in the fun yourself.

16 comments:

  1. nice....sex is def more than the physical...and if you can really master that...well the sky is def the limit...smiles. nice fib

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  2. A lot of truth to this I think--made me grin!

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  3. a steamy ride. flash eye-candy men i misread at first as flash-eyed candy men. it was all part of the fun. and then mind candy later was very nice.

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  4. He has a good point really. And sex IS so much more than just physical indeed.

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  5. The best sex happens from the neck up...ha..i like... or at least it starts there... much more in the mind than physically

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  6. Seems to me it's like ringing a bell and the clapper is in your brain but it all connects nicely. Good times.

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  7. From the neck up... the most important part which differentiates lovemaking from sex.

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  8. Oh this is just awesome... so nice work on the form and a message that all men with brains appreciate (and most of them think the same about women).. Love how you contrasted the first stanza with the second one and how you worked the triangular shape to perfection.

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  9. "Mind candy" ~ what a great tribute to exploring and growing and learning ~ thank you.

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  10. I love candy and what's good about mind candy is it's calorie free, heck it's just free. Good poem here.

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  11. Oh I'd take the mind over the body every time. Great writing!

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  12. mmmm good use of the form ~ I love the sizzling write, sex is also a mind game, smiles ~

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  13. Nara, the first line of the last stanza is the absolute truth. Nicely penned poem.

    Pamela

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  14. nicely penned..indeed it must first start from the neck up to have the qualities for lasting sizzle. ^_~

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Thanks for sharing your thoughts.