Very strong poetic voice. I'm a huge fan of free verse as it allows the poet moment with words. Enjoyed this Missyhttp://missy-itsmyworld.blogspot.com/2012/08/vacation-55.html
ha cool...this was unraveling slowly...artist angst...ha...good to resurrect this love story and make the metaphors breathe again..
Ahhhh...The gift of gab!Women tend to believe the things that men say.Loved your wordy 55 Nara Malone.I sure miss you when you don't play.Thats why this week I'm HAPPY!!!!Thanks for this semi-erotic gem My Friend,Have a Kick Ass Week-End
G-Man said it all. Darn! LOL.I really like your sexy poetic poem packed with mixed emotions. Excellent 55!Mine is hereHave you a ROCKING AND BLESSED WEEKEND!!!hugsshakira
Totally enjoyed this 55! One day I might dabble in poetry again. I got it beat out of me back in high school and just haven't discovered the gumption to try again. Keep it rollin'
Hot! I especially like the last stanza.
Love your 55 words - perfect.Anna :o]
Resuscitate dead-wood...they have medication for that right? smiles....haha....write it out....never know what might rise up...smiles.
Darkly sensual. I especially like that last two lines.
yes I understand better now that I saw the 2 other thirds ! thanks !
If the fantasy can me write and resuscitate dead-wood words, why not?Have a good weekend ~
Thanks for sharing your thoughts.