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Friday Flash 55: Dumped

megan running down bergis road - DSC00065

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At his age the sight of me in shorts shouldn't get him so excited.
He licks my knees.
"No way."
He licks my toes.
"It's too early."
His eyes adore me.
I get my running shoes.
I'm dumped at the front gate for the first big-eyed doe to flick her tail at him.

This post is part of G-Mans Friday Flash 55. Drop by to see what other participants wrote.

11 comments:

  1. I hope we're talking about your dog here. ;-)
    Nice 55.

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  2. love this - a moment of -huh? becomes clear, but what a great write!

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  3. Nara Malone....?
    People lick your toes?
    (Give me a moment)
    *sigh*
    Excuse me.. What was I saying?

    Oh yeah... Someone dumped YOU?
    What an Ass-Hole!
    Pick yourself up, and move on to the next victim.

    Loved your 55...

    LOVED IT!...Have a Kick Ass Week-End

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  4. Now that's a dog with one thought in mind! Freedom to bolt away on a personal journey! Love the weaving of innuendo!

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  5. nice! i hope you are not talking about your dog here...lol. hot 55 nara!

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  6. Fickle dogs! But who can resist those melting eyes? Neat 55!

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  7. Dumped? He was just a stepping stone.

    There is something energetically awesome about this 55 I can't quite put my finger on, but it works very well and makes me think of a Joni Mitchell song from For The Roses where she is "running like a white tail doe." A song called "Still Like To See You Sometime," I think.

    I like your 55!

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  8. Loved the playfulness of this. Nicely done! What a dog.

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