7/16/10

Friday 55: Ashes #flashfiction

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Heart Aflame by BozDoz on Flickr photo sharing

“Focus,” he said, tugging the rope.

But how? Her mind ran in circles, this way and that, yapping like a little dog.

He layered pleasure and pain, smothering thoughts with an escalating craving for Him, consuming her in flames, until nothing remained but a soft floating feeling – ashes of who she had been, landing.

This post is in response to G-Man's Friday Flash 55. Participants tell a story in 55 words. See what other participants wrote here.

7 comments:

  1. whew. smoking 55. great imagerys and i felt every word...smiles.

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  2. Wow. I'm not sure just what's happening. The rope and the pain made me wonder. But overall, pretty hot.

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  3. "Her mind ran in circles, this way and that, yapping like a little dog."

    Great imagery there! I can just see the little yapper!

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  4. Steamy stuff and a great 55. My 55 is HERE .

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  5. No safe word?
    Hmmmmm
    Sweet Bondage...Nara Malone..This ROCKED!
    Excellent 55 My Friend.
    What a treasure you are to Fridays...WOW!
    Thank You so much for the sizzle!
    Have a Kick Ass Week-End...G

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  6. Thank you all for dropping by. I usually try to catch you at your websites, rather than in comments here, but I have been berated for letting my commenters appear to be unanswered, so I will try to keep up at both ends.

    @G-Man No safe words needed between them I think. I love Fridays with the Flash 55 crowd.

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  7. This was one is so deep, full of passion, with a fine sprinkling of the surreal.

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